Nice love story but i didn’t understand one thing. Are you writing the story about Pretish or are you Pretish. The beginning kind of confused me a bit though i understood the story.
when I had started reading, I had thought it is sweet romantic story ( if I am right, it is fiction ), but coming towards the end, it had made me sad, when he loss his love of life. losing your dear ones is one of the most tragic emotion and you had narrated this so beautifully.
So full of emotions, I was a little afraid when I read – the most sensual creature alive, Amy.
But then it was his illusion state and way to bear his loss. I’m sure its hard for him to live days without her and only memories.
Oh vow!!!! Such a sweet story . You have narrated it vert well as I could imagine and went into the scene completely. Looking forward to read a lot from you
Oh my my….it was really a beautiful piece of fiction. The emotions that you portrayed were so natural and the narration was beautiful. Would love to hear more from you.
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Sushmita Malakar (@sushmitamalakar)
So, so beautiful! I loved how this emotional piece is written – it looks effortless. Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
hellopallavi13
IAM glad you liked my story.
lifewithmypenguin
It was heartbreaking to know Pritish found and lost his love, wife again that night.
hellopallavi13
Thanks again
mommy_insight
That’s so beautiful flow of emotions, I like love stories.#millennialscribbler #myfriendalexa
hellopallavi13
Thanks
Varsha aka Yogita
Woah so many emotions in a single post 🙂
thoroughly enjoyed the story 🙂 and was shocked to read the mystery.
#MyFriendAlexa #vigorousreads
hellopallavi13
Thanks
vidhya29
and it’s beautiful! loved reading it! Amazing!!
hellopallavi13
Thank u so much
Blogaberry Foo
Nice love story but i didn’t understand one thing. Are you writing the story about Pretish or are you Pretish. The beginning kind of confused me a bit though i understood the story.
Dr. Surbhi Prapanna
when I had started reading, I had thought it is sweet romantic story ( if I am right, it is fiction ), but coming towards the end, it had made me sad, when he loss his love of life. losing your dear ones is one of the most tragic emotion and you had narrated this so beautifully.
Pr@Gun
So full of emotions, I was a little afraid when I read – the most sensual creature alive, Amy.
But then it was his illusion state and way to bear his loss. I’m sure its hard for him to live days without her and only memories.
Rashmi
beautiful, spine chilling… some love stories meet such sad ends..
lifewithmypenguin
I loved re-reading this heartbreaking story, Pallavi.
Fareha
The emotions are so beautifully described. Great read.
nooranandchawla
Wow a very sensitive and beautifully written story! Hats off. Would love to read more from you.
indu mathi
Oh vow!!!! Such a sweet story . You have narrated it vert well as I could imagine and went into the scene completely. Looking forward to read a lot from you
Arushi
Loved the beautiful post. It is so effortlessly written. Would love to read more from you
Debidutta Mohanty
Oh my my….it was really a beautiful piece of fiction. The emotions that you portrayed were so natural and the narration was beautiful. Would love to hear more from you.